some short story

infinite_trial

11-22-2005, 05:40 PM

Reminded me of borin college afternoons at home after an hour has been spent watchin cable tv…I browse mah journal and write mah stories and poems in it. I have written sumthin while I sit here waitin for work to be done. It may sound like a teeny bopper pocketbook to you…I guess I’m just bein mushy…

Summer Rain

Play.

I watch her closely as she was lying still on my bed. Her hair spread out on my pillow like the night while the sun that was beaming through the window illuminated her beautiful face. Those lonely eyes that I have always dreamed of…those hands that I have longed to touch and hold…those lips that I have kissed a thousand times in my dreams. Five years passed by and yet, she never fails to make my heart skip a beat. I waited so long for this moment to be with her. I’m still in love with her.

Rewind.

Rain and I grew up together. Our families have been friends for a long time. We live near the beach so most of our childhood memories were filled of building sand castles and splashes of cold seawater. Everytime I remember her crying to me, I can’t help but smile.

“I hate Daniel” she would always say. Daniel’s my twin brother. Rain and I would usually build sand castles and my brother would come with a pail of water to wash them all away. I, being the quiet twin, would just simply let it all pass. However, our parents found out about the whole thing and scolded my brother. He didn’t talk to me for a whole week. He thought I have told them all about it.

I have always kept to myself what I feel for Rain. We blossomed into teenagers and she never knew about what I feel for her. My parents sent me to the city to study in a university. My brother, on the other hand, stayed home to study in a local college. My dad wanted to keep an eye on him. He said he also wanted to teach him about our family business.

While I was away from home, Rain and I were exchanging letters. Her letters make me feel home, talking to her while we are strolling at the beach. I have also learned she and my brother were getting along very well. She said Daniel have changed a lot from the time I have been gone. One time I went to surprise them by going home during summer break.

I ran to the shore hoping to find Rain. I don’t know what I’m feeling but my heart is beatin mad like it would explode. I saw Rain and Daniel kissing under the palm tree. I thought I saw Rain waving her hand but I suddenly turned away and went back running home. I’m such a fool to believe that she have loved me all along. Of all painful things, she fell in love with my twin brother.

Rain and I never had the chance to talk. She tried to but it was too painful for me to dissolve what she has to say so I stayed away from her. Dinners with her family would mean an hour of pretending I wasn’t hurting. At night, I walk down the beach and build sand castles on my own. Under the stars I cry.

I went back to the city and finished my college. Rain tried to call me a lot of times but I didn’t return her calls. She sends me letters, though I never opened them at all. I tried to forget about her. I have worked in the city and live away from my family. The last time I heard from mom, Daniel and Rain got married. A year later I got married too. Mom would always tell me to come home. One day I did.

Fast forward.

“I’m confused. I love your brother but I think I love you too” her tears flowing from those sad eyes. I sat in front of her and held her hand. She didn’t look on my face while I was staring at her. I know this is not right…but I hang in there for a second trying to convince myself one mistake would not hurt. I stroked her hair away from her face and tasted those lips again for the last time. I told myself it’s enough for me to know she loves me too. Afterall, I love my brother. He loves her as much as I do.

I promised myself that would be the first and last night. I could still feel the pain…but somehow, hearing her say all those things makes me want to linger on the moment for a while.

“I love you, Danielle” she whispered in my ear as we lay down on the bed.

Pause.

docomo

11-22-2005, 05:42 PM

parang tele novela :smiley:

infinite_trial

11-22-2005, 05:45 PM

hihi ganun po ba…

tfcfan

11-22-2005, 06:00 PM

Reminded me of borin college afternoons at home after an hour has been spent watchin cable tv…I browse mah journal and write mah stories and poems in it. I have written sumthin while I sit here waitin for work to be done. It may sound like a teeny bopper pocketbook to you…I guess I’m just bein mushy…

Summer Rain

Play.

I watch her closely as she was lying still on my bed. Her hair spread out on my pillow like the night while the sun that was beaming through the window illuminated her beautiful face. Those lonely eyes that I have always dreamed of…those hands that I have longed to touch and hold…those lips that I have kissed a thousand times in my dreams. Five years passed by and yet, she never fails to make my heart skip a beat. I waited so long for this moment to be with her. I’m still in love with her.

Rewind.

Rain and I grew up together. Our families have been friends for a long time. We live near the beach so most of our childhood memories were filled of building sand castles and splashes of cold seawater. Everytime I remember her crying to me, I can’t help but smile.

“I hate Daniel” she would always say. Daniel’s my twin brother. Rain and I would usually build sand castles and my brother would come with a pail of water to wash them all away. I, being the quiet twin, would just simply let it all pass. However, our parents found out about the whole thing and scolded my brother. He didn’t talk to me for a whole week. He thought I have told them all about it.

I have always kept to myself what I feel for Rain. We blossomed into teenagers and she never knew about what I feel for her. My parents sent me to the city to study in a university. My brother, on the other hand, stayed home to study in a local college. My dad wanted to keep an eye on him. He said he also wanted to teach him about our family business.

While I was away from home, Rain and I were exchanging letters. Her letters make me feel home, talking to her while we are strolling at the beach. I have also learned she and my brother were getting along very well. She said Daniel have changed a lot from the time I have been gone. One time I went to surprise them by going home during summer break.

I ran to the shore hoping to find Rain. I don’t know what I’m feeling but my heart is beatin mad like it would explode. I saw Rain and Daniel kissing under the palm tree. I thought I saw Rain waving her hand but I suddenly turned away and went back running home. I’m such a fool to believe that she have loved me all along. Of all painful things, she fell in love with my twin brother.

Rain and I never had the chance to talk. She tried to but it was too painful for me to dissolve what she has to say so I stayed away from her. Dinners with her family would mean an hour of pretending I wasn’t hurting. At night, I walk down the beach and build sand castles on my own. Under the stars I cry.

I went back to the city and finished my college. Rain tried to call me a lot of times but I didn’t return her calls. She sends me letters, though I never opened them at all. I tried to forget about her. I have worked in the city and live away from my family. The last time I heard from mom, Daniel and Rain got married. A year later I got married too. Mom would always tell me to come home. One day I did.

Fast forward.

“I’m confused. I love your brother but I think I love you too” her tears flowing from those sad eyes. I sat in front of her and held her hand. She didn’t look on my face while I was staring at her. I know this is not right…but I hang in there for a second trying to convince myself one mistake would not hurt. I stroked her hair away from her face and tasted those lips again for the last time. I told myself it’s enough for me to know she loves me too. Afterall, I love my brother. He loves her as much as I do.

I promised myself that would be the first and last night. I could still feel the pain…but somehow, hearing her say all those things makes me want to linger on the moment for a while.

“I love you, Danielle” she whispered in my ear as we lay down on the bed.

Pause.di na ba sila nagkatuluyan? i also love to read romance pocketbooks when I was in my teenage years.:hihi:

rodem

11-22-2005, 06:01 PM

infinite_trial, may karugtong pa ba yan? san na yung naughty part? o gusto mo dugtungan ko… hehehehe…:smiley:

infinite_trial

11-22-2005, 06:06 PM

porno na pag may naughty part kasi pareho silang babae!

rodem

11-22-2005, 06:21 PM

porno na pag may naughty part kasi pareho silang babae!

eh di isipin na lang natin na yung mga bida ay lalaki at babae para may naughty part and hindi porno… ahihihi:D

infinite_trial

11-22-2005, 06:23 PM

sayang nasa notebook ko kasi yung mga mala- Sidney Sheldon na story ko e hehehe…

tfcfan

11-22-2005, 06:58 PM

porno na pag may naughty part kasi pareho silang babae!
ay sori di ko alam na p’reho silang girl!:stuck_out_tongue:

:open_mouth: pahiya ako dun ah!

rodem

11-22-2005, 07:24 PM

sayang nasa notebook ko kasi yung mga mala- Sidney Sheldon na story ko e hehehe…

so you mean ikaw na ang bida dun? wag kang magdamot sister… share mo na yan sa mga ka-TF mong tulad ko… hehehe…:smiley:

liway

11-22-2005, 09:57 PM

anong ending ng story. would danielle continue to cheat on her brother? o iiwanan na lang ni rain si daniel? hindi kaya pinaglalarauan lang ni rain ang magkapatid?

infinite_trial

11-23-2005, 12:02 AM

hindi po ako yun!

mazel

12-11-2005, 05:17 PM

w0w infinite_trial, galing naman mag-sulat… :dowave:

pagpunta ko sa yokohama, pabasa ng notebook mo… hehehe…

and i agree with rodem, share mo sa ka-TF natin… hehehe… :smiley:

hotcake

12-11-2005, 07:24 PM

infinite_trial ang ganda naman ng story kaso nakakabitin,:smiley: kailan mo naman ire-release dito ang karugtong niyan? :stuck_out_tongue:

infinite_trial

12-11-2005, 09:19 PM

hehe tlg pong bitin yung story. hindi ko na yata masusundan. hayaan nyo pag nagkaroon ulet ng inspiration another…tragic (?) story hehehe.

may_abe

12-03-2007, 04:41 PM

wala pa bang part 2?:slight_smile:

infinite_trial

12-03-2007, 07:47 PM

wala pa bang part 2?:slight_smile:

hehe na-bump pala to. wala po e :frowning:
kapag nadedepressed lang ako nakakagawa ng ganyan :smiley:

kakkoii_daw

12-04-2007, 11:09 AM

uyyyy… g on g… :nuts: san na yung part 2?.. :hihi:

nasalaag

12-04-2007, 01:33 PM

in demand ka na sis IT hehe… I agree, ang ganda ng story. naappreciate ko ung pagkabitin nya. pabasa na lang din ng iba :smiley:

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